Dear Daddy

[Rayvynne]

(Per request I decided to join the endless number of poetry populating these boards. Hope you enjoy.)

Dear Daddy

Dear Daddy did you know
That you hurt me even so

You promised comfort, you promised love
But what I got was sorrow and pain

Daddy…Daddy…I called your name
But you sent me on my way

Dear Daddy did you know
I loved you dearly even so

I sought your affection, I sought your praise
But what I got was heartache and pain

Daddy…Daddy…I called your name
But you turned the other way

Dear Daddy did you know
All I want is you to know

Here I am, all grown up
But you still don’t look much

Daddy…Daddy…I tried to call
But this time I just could not

Dear Daddy did you know
That you lost me ever so.

[Zarni]

quite provocative. very mature style, i like it

you got any more?

[Artemis]

Very powerful. thank you for sharing this. *gently bows*

[sonnetinkinston]

[Nodding to the superior talent of another]

I'm hoping you'll be gracing us with more of your work, Rayvynne.