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Post by Japic on Jun 24, 2004 17:34:11 GMT -5
The Liar
Talk to me later, he said that he would, So wait for him, I did as I should,
I sat and I waited, while I thought and debated, Wishing for his return, my constant waiting never abated,
Alas that ass, he has not returned to me, Even now I sit as I sat, my heart upon my sleeve,
I try to get by, his words still ringing throughout the day, I cannot stand the agony, I must seek to parlay,
I think him a fool for never having returned, As always, it is only me that gets burned.
In light of all the recent poetry, I wrote up a little something today. It's not very good in my opinion, but I thought I'd share anyhow. The mindset of the poem is me waiting for someone (KMan) to return an IM to me. Bye.
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Artemis
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Post by Artemis on Jun 24, 2004 17:38:35 GMT -5
LOL I found this quite amusing. It is quite good I believe ;D keep up the good work
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Zarni
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Post by Zarni on Jun 24, 2004 17:41:48 GMT -5
almost like a limerick. kind of. light hearted verse, i believe.
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Post by sonnetinkinston on Jun 25, 2004 9:37:53 GMT -5
I enjoyed this, though whether that is because I like your style (which I do) or because I have spent my own time waiting for K-man's response to a PM (which I have), I'm not sure. ;D
If your comfortable, I'm sure we'd all love to see more like this.
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