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Post by Cel on Sept 6, 2005 23:17:46 GMT -5
I figured I'll post my sketches too, since Althael talked me into getting back to drawing. Here's something I made yesterday when I couldnt sleep: cel642.deviantart.com/Criticism is more then welcome.  |
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Post by Althael on Sept 7, 2005 9:28:38 GMT -5
Although it is a sketch, don't post it in the scrap section. Most of the peoples don't even seems to know that there is a 'scrap' section. Unless that it is really a scrap...
Otherwise, it looks good. Great proportions.
Could use a bit more details though.
Looking at it again.. is the guy in the back putting his gun in the water or ?
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Post by Japic on Sept 7, 2005 9:40:05 GMT -5
Well done, but if I were these guys, I'd be pissed; I hate it when I get my silencer wet.  IMO you've got some catching up to do man, you've only got one deviation vs peeps like Althael who have lots. Get crackin, I expect to see some work out of you man; chop chop. |
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Post by Cel on Sept 7, 2005 10:15:58 GMT -5
Thanks ;D Humm, alright. I'll post that in the other section. |
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Post by Althael on Sept 13, 2005 18:39:32 GMT -5
I know some guy that would enjoy some 'militaristic art'. If you really want to get back to drawing, these guys would love to critic your stuff so you can improve it. coolart.dk/dS/phpBB2/index.phpThough, the board is pretty dead at this time.. we're trying to lurk peoples in to generate some life in it. |
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Post by Yakumo on Sept 13, 2005 20:48:56 GMT -5
Pretty neat work Cel. I do comic/anime style drawings, If I get my crap together Ill post some pictures up here.
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Post by Cel on Sept 14, 2005 7:54:56 GMT -5
Anime, eh? Think you can teach me how to draw faces? I'm horrible with those... :S
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Post by Cel on Sept 14, 2005 11:47:28 GMT -5
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Post by Althael on Sept 14, 2005 15:27:36 GMT -5
Doesn't look bad, but her left arm is WAY too skinny.
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Post by K Man on Sept 14, 2005 15:54:42 GMT -5
Good job on both accounts Cel...definetly want to see more work from you!
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Post by Cel on Sept 14, 2005 23:03:55 GMT -5
Doesn't look bad, but her left arm is WAY too skinny. Yeah, I know.  |
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Post by Cel on Sept 17, 2005 10:07:08 GMT -5
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Post by Althael on Sept 17, 2005 10:37:51 GMT -5
There should be option to adjust contrast, shadows, darkness and such on your scanner. Try to play with these. If there's none of these options, draw darker or get a new scanner. These looks great. Though, the ranger's legs seems a bit short and the hands.. well, try to elaborate them a bit more. |
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Post by Althael on Sept 18, 2005 13:40:48 GMT -5
BTW, if you really want to get your stuff better and elaborate more on anything, go there: www.conceptart.org/ |
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Post by Cel on Sept 19, 2005 4:47:31 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Cel on Oct 25, 2005 11:16:47 GMT -5
Alright, finally got to finishing this one.  |
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Post by K Man on Oct 25, 2005 14:08:42 GMT -5
Good job Cel! My only complaint is that the victims' fingers look a bit too long/weird. Other than that, pretty cool picture.
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Post by Cel on Oct 25, 2005 14:54:40 GMT -5
Yeah, I sorta messed those up. Thanks |
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Post by Japic on Oct 25, 2005 16:11:08 GMT -5
I think it looks good, but the hands could be shrunken down on Mr. Victim; the overall shape is fairly good, but they're bigger than his head. I have pretty big hands and even mine aren't that mondo...
Keep 'em coming Cel, your doing well!
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Post by Cel on Dec 22, 2005 9:22:31 GMT -5
Well, since my PC is friend and I got no scanner, I moved to animation and drawing with Flash. ;D So, here's a nice little something.  s7.invisionfree.com/Brackenwood/index.php?showtopic=6900Too bad there's no Flash tag here like on that other forum, but oh well. I guess you can view it from there. |
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